I don't know what happened between your TXT.rtf file (sent by e-mail) and what you put up in writeboard, but there were differences. I asked you for confirmation that this (in writeboard) was your latest draft as compared with TXT.rtf. Perhaps you didn't see that comment, because you didn't reply. (See for this writeboard two, PW energygp2, document version 4, and my first comment on the thread).
Migeru pointed out that there was a back-reference to this explanation (above) while the explanation wasn't in the text, but you didn't react to that either. I could only assume you had cut this part. If you really wanted to put it in, then it's a pity, but I don't think anyone but you could have sorted this out.
I think we have to be very careful with drafts when working close on one another. There were problems later in the day, if you remember, where a version got crushed. Unfortunately, in this case, you didn't notice that part had gone. I don't recall having seen it (and it has links that go off the right margin, I think I'd have noticed).
My apologies, Jérôme. I'm really sorry it's missing.
Jérôme, do we take it you're not available to make this edit yourself?
We should just send an updated version - maybe that can be an opportunity to add signatories like we did in the earlier Open Letter - if you agree, would you make the request in the diary?
And I'm sorry I missed the absence of the paragraph yesterday evening. In the long run, we're all dead. John Maynard Keynes
Don't fret, in the context of this discussion you could take it as a joke... Those whom the Gods wish to destroy They first make mad. -- Euripides