If I understood it I could do wonders with it by a rewrite. You can't be me, I'm taken
This is presented as a declaration of fact, when it is a debatable, and far from generally accepted, proposition, as the various attempts by Member States to bring about the creation of "national champions" have demonstrated recently.
I am not averse to tinkling out the commas myself in ET, as I am not allowed to do it in professional writing. But the above sentence is a comma too far; especially after 'accepted' You can't be me, I'm taken
BTW, check the comments at the writeboard. *Lunatic*, n. One whose delusions are out of fashion.
