They seem better at the end of Section Two, leading on to the missing questions in the GP.
Should they be moved down there? (i.e. at the end, not the beginning, of the insertion?)
However, don't those two paragraphs make more sense at the end of the insertion rather than the beginning? Meaning, as a lead on to Section Three, the missing questions?
Do as you care to. In the long run, we're all dead. John Maynard Keynes