So, what was sent and in what form?
I have a couple of names of people we could send the final version to anyway. I'd be keen to send it again with that paragraph. See v5 linked above to see where it was positioned in the text. In the long run, we're all dead. John Maynard Keynes
(Here is Jerome's rough draft of the following bit:)
As I say below, there were inexplicable problems later between version 8, which included your language edits and mine, and version 11 where they had disappeared. We probably have to be careful to flag good versions and communicate in comments about what we are doing or have done.
The text above was sent as a PDF. I'll send the PDF out to the co-workers now. I'd have done so earlier but it took me an age to adapt the html (from writeboard) for Scoop.