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Thanks to both you and Jérôme for these suggestions.
by afew (afew(a in a circle)eurotrib_dot_com) on Fri Sep 8th, 2006 at 03:25:27 PM EST
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Here's what I've done with it:

Moreover, policy options other than those of the Green Paper are absent from the responses presented in the questionnaire. A major example is that, at no point, does the questionnaire offer a return to centralised forms of control of the sector, whether on a regional, national or pan-European basis. Or, alternatively, the option of a decentralised sector with serious limitations and selection among the players. These may not be the Commission's preference, but a neutral questionnaire should acknowledge that these options exist and allow people to express their preference for such alternatives. Similarly, at no point does the questionnaire allow respondents to express a preference for demand reduction mechanisms (whether directed through taxes or quotas, or incited via education or "good practice"). In the same order of ideas, transport policy, despite the evident relation of transport systems to energy consumption, is not evoked.

Entire questions offer a narrowly-focussed range of responses that evacuate essential items. An example is Question 2, concerning the development of a single European grid, in which the only options proposed concern management rules, no mention being made of planning, financial, construction, and environmental issues which must inevitably be faced in the creation of a single grid.

by afew (afew(a in a circle)eurotrib_dot_com) on Fri Sep 8th, 2006 at 04:06:27 PM EST
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Or, alternatively, the option of a decentralised sector with serious limitations and selection among the players.

I'm not sure I understand that sentence (at least the selection bit).

I like the paragraph as a whole, but this sentence is confusing to me.

In the long run, we're all dead. John Maynard Keynes

by Jerome a Paris (etg@eurotrib.com) on Fri Sep 8th, 2006 at 04:30:29 PM EST
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That's because you're the centralised man, and I'm the feed-in-law advocate :-)

By selection, I meant preferring one type of production to another. Wrong choice of words, maybe "different treatment of" instead of "selection among" would work.

*Lunatic*, n.
One whose delusions are out of fashion.

by DoDo on Fri Sep 8th, 2006 at 04:40:24 PM EST
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Speaking of selection, I think a specific sentence relating to public funding of the sector should be mentioned. That's somewhat linked to your selection comment as well as to my centralisation one.

In the long run, we're all dead. John Maynard Keynes
by Jerome a Paris (etg@eurotrib.com) on Fri Sep 8th, 2006 at 04:51:00 PM EST
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Also linked to the single grid question.
by afew (afew(a in a circle)eurotrib_dot_com) on Fri Sep 8th, 2006 at 04:53:16 PM EST
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OK, DoDo will no doubt explain, since I lifted it from him... ;)
by afew (afew(a in a circle)eurotrib_dot_com) on Fri Sep 8th, 2006 at 04:41:01 PM EST
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Moreover, policy options other than those of the Green Paper are absent from the responses presented in the questionnaire.

  • A major example is that, at no point, does the questionnaire offer a return to centralised forms of control of the sector, whether on a regional, national or pan-European basis. Public financing of the sector is not contemplated. Neither is any explicit public policy to favor some technological choices over others. Alternatively, the option of a decentralised sector with serious limitation on the size of actors is also ignored. All these options may not be the Commission's preference, but a neutral questionnaire should acknowledge that they exist and are backed by significant constituencies, and should allow people to express their preference for such alternatives.

  • at no point does the questionnaire allow respondents to express a preference for demand reduction mechanisms (whether directed through taxes or quotas, or incited via education or "good practice").

  •  similarly, transport and land occupancy policies, despite their evident impact on energy use patterns, are not even evoked.

Entire questions offer a narrowly-focussed range of responses that evacuate essential items. An example is Question 2, concerning the development of a single European grid, in which the only options proposed concern management rules, no mention being made of planning, financial, construction, and environmental issues which must inevitably be faced in the creation of a single grid.


In the long run, we're all dead. John Maynard Keynes
by Jerome a Paris (etg@eurotrib.com) on Fri Sep 8th, 2006 at 05:11:21 PM EST
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Merged and edited for idiom.
by Colman (colman at eurotrib.com) on Fri Sep 8th, 2006 at 05:30:44 PM EST
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Fine. I made a minor edit.

Now, I'll do something more on languages if I get the goods over the weekend. If not, it's ready to go as it is, imo.

by afew (afew(a in a circle)eurotrib_dot_com) on Sat Sep 9th, 2006 at 01:13:57 AM EST
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