I don't think, on this basis, that it's worth taking the language aspect any further. So we can go with the text as it stands, unless there are any new suggestions.
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I also received, this evening (!) a reply from the Biofuels Consultation to our mail thanking them for running a proper consultation. I'll post it tomorrow with the final draft.