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Agreed, also perhaps something more emotional would be in order (same text, different ending => my words are cheap, replace them with whatever you like).

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by Alex in Toulouse on Thu Sep 7th, 2006 at 06:42:39 AM EST
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Something like that. I also suggest to write "European citizens" or "EU citizens" instead of just "citizens".

*Lunatic*, n.
One whose delusions are out of fashion.
by DoDo on Thu Sep 7th, 2006 at 08:30:06 AM EST
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the Public Consultation on the Energy Green Paper falls short of living up to its great expectations
We could say "the expectations raised by the Commission's communication strategy".

Nothing is 'mere'. — Richard P. Feynman
by Migeru (migeru at eurotrib dot com) on Thu Sep 7th, 2006 at 09:22:37 AM EST
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Further: our expectations.

*Lunatic*, n.
One whose delusions are out of fashion.
by DoDo on Thu Sep 7th, 2006 at 09:46:24 AM EST
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True, but wouldn't we want to imply that more than just us will be disappointed?

Nothing is 'mere'. — Richard P. Feynman
by Migeru (migeru at eurotrib dot com) on Thu Sep 7th, 2006 at 09:57:53 AM EST
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