If I read you correctly, you avoid any mention of business´ responsibility in the entire disaster.  It obviously looks away from banking, finance and all the highly-placed, ethically bankrupt and overrated types.  Remember at the ´elite´ level, politicians and businesspeople are one and the same, (white) old-boys network.

It is a lot more credible and realistic to put the blame on both and their ´connection´.

Our knowledge has surpassed our wisdom. -Charu Saxena.