i would stillsomehow to read it from outside.. someone that has nto seen the english or the spanish version... there must be a tone of english and spanish incorrect expressions (well maybe three or four)...
But to make this change I would need more time.. I do nto know what is best.. to check myself this version adn give it the go... and then fix it.. or wait for an external opinion.
A pleasure I therefore claim to show, not how men think in myths, but how myths operate in men's minds without their being aware of the fact. Levi-Strauss, Claude