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Also taken at the flower show but it wasn't until I got home that I realised I should have just pulled that centre flower to the front and framed it within the others - rather than having a mess of flowers that you can't see the whole shape of.

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by In Wales (inwales aaat eurotrib.com) on Fri Mar 7th, 2008 at 04:06:32 AM EST
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is this the flower subthread?

here is my first (very amateur) entry, from one of two visits last week to the Hangzhou Botanical Gardens.



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by marco (cowannar at gmail punkt com) on Fri Mar 7th, 2008 at 05:02:06 AM EST
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and here is another entry, though technically i am not sure if these are "plum" blossoms; these yellow pretties were found amid the the white and pink to deep pink plum blossoms in this part of the gardens:

they turn out to be "wintersweets" (Chimonanthus praecox), or 蝋梅 (là méi, literally "wax or glazed plum") in Mandarin.

unlike the other blossoms, these have a very noticeable and delightful fragrance.  i had never known them before, they turn out to be fairly common.

Truth unfolds in time through a communal process.

by marco (cowannar at gmail punkt com) on Fri Mar 7th, 2008 at 05:13:33 AM EST
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These. flowers are lovely, BK

Hey, Grandma Moses started late!
by LEP (rafifoon@yahoo.com) on Fri Mar 7th, 2008 at 05:33:29 AM EST
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Nice shot.

I'm guessing you posted this under the constructive criticism thread by accident ... but I think a little cropping helps with the impact of that.

by Colman (colman at eurotrib.com) on Fri Mar 7th, 2008 at 06:09:09 AM EST
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Yes... Much better crop :-)

"What can I do, What can I write, Against the fall of Night". A.E. Housman
by margouillat (hemidactylus(dot)frenatus(at)wanadoo(dot)fr) on Fri Mar 7th, 2008 at 06:11:02 AM EST
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I like both, but I do like bruno-ken's original framing.  In this version the flower is front and centre, and you can see the two buds underneath.  In bruno-kens the eye phases a bit--the sharpness of the pistils (maybe I got that wrong!) against the blurriness, but I like the phasing (I'm just saying a lot of personal choice is about what we want---heh....I just wanted bruno-ken to know I liked his photo just the way it was, but I like your version too!  They're different approaches, that's all I wanted to say--not saying it very well, though.

Don't fight forces, use them R. Buckminster Fuller.
by rg (leopold dot lepster at google mail dot com) on Fri Mar 7th, 2008 at 07:11:12 AM EST
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That's why I said "I think" ...  
by Colman (colman at eurotrib.com) on Fri Mar 7th, 2008 at 07:13:03 AM EST
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Tat's always the problem with composition... :-)
Either you want to achieve something (a story) and play with settings and composition's accepted and widespread rules (or on the contrary flaunt them)...

Or you just have a nice feeling about the scene and take a picture of it to keep it in some sort of Proust's madeleine diairy !

In the first situation you already think about communicating the picture when you take it, in the second situation,it's more personal and when you show it to others, it's like giving them a bit of your inner feelings...!

None is superior to the other, they are just juxtaposed !
But Colman was right in trying to show how the same picture can tell different stories... :-)

"What can I do, What can I write, Against the fall of Night". A.E. Housman

by margouillat (hemidactylus(dot)frenatus(at)wanadoo(dot)fr) on Fri Mar 7th, 2008 at 07:19:21 AM EST
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In keeping with the Capa "get closer" quotation (above in ref to In Wales' pub portrait) I'd go even closer. The out of focus stuff doesn't add much for me, and in this close-up you notice the buds more - while there is still enough fuzzy background to give a bit of context and to bring out focus on flower.

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Maybe it's because I'm a Londoner - that I moved to Nice.

by Ted Welch (tedwelch-at-mac-dot-com) on Fri Mar 7th, 2008 at 08:50:47 AM EST
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I prefer mine. I like the context.
by Colman (colman at eurotrib.com) on Fri Mar 7th, 2008 at 08:53:58 AM EST
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That's the irritating thing about aesthetics :-)

Maybe it's because I'm a Londoner - that I moved to Nice.
by Ted Welch (tedwelch-at-mac-dot-com) on Fri Mar 7th, 2008 at 09:16:45 AM EST
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you guessed right, but definitely welcome all and any such feedbacks.

thanks for the tip about cropping.  i am still just playing around with adjusting hue, saturation, contrast, etc. in iPhoto, but i had not even thought about cropping.

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by marco (cowannar at gmail punkt com) on Sat Mar 8th, 2008 at 10:00:21 PM EST
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