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 Oh, yes, I am glad for feedback. I'm so deep into this stuff that even when I'm trying to take a step back I assume much context that no one except a corn state agronomist would have.
by SacredCowTipper (sct@strandedwind.org) on Tue Dec 23rd, 2008 at 04:53:32 PM EST
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I'd be happy to give a rough critique of the text as it stands from the point of view of both as an average joe for whom this stuff is totally new, and as a professional copywriter.

It seems to be something worth the time of cooperating on, to ensure your message gets the best possible chance of changing things.

You can't be me, I'm taken

by Sven Triloqvist on Tue Dec 23rd, 2008 at 05:00:01 PM EST
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