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I'd be happy to give a rough critique of the text as it stands from the point of view of both as an average joe for whom this stuff is totally new, and as a professional copywriter.

It seems to be something worth the time of cooperating on, to ensure your message gets the best possible chance of changing things.

You can't be me, I'm taken

by Sven Triloqvist on Tue Dec 23rd, 2008 at 05:00:01 PM EST
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