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Gysi on the EU "rescue package" for Greece | 55 comments (54 topical, 1 editorial, 0 hidden)
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"On the third, for the ending, can you suggest something not passive (that is, someone has to correct her ways, rather than a correction is needed)?"

It's the impersonal "man" so you could use "one" but it might be stronger with "you" as you first began it:

If you (can) see that this devastating and rigorous austerity policy does not lead to our rescue of Greece, but, quite the contrary, to the fact that we lead Greece ever further into disaster, then you must correct it.

by afew (afew(a in a circle)eurotrib_dot_com) on Wed Feb 29th, 2012 at 01:30:23 AM EST
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Gysi on the EU "rescue package" for Greece | 55 comments (54 topical, 1 editorial, 0 hidden)
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